范文:The One

「要求」

　　请以“独生子女家庭”为题，写一篇100字左右的文章。具体内容如下：

　　在中国，大多数人开始认为，只有一个孩子的家庭要比有几个孩子的家庭好。

　　计划生育的优点：控制人口增长；家长有更多的时间关心自己孩子的学习和生活。

　　因此出现了越来越多的独生子女家庭。但有人说独生子女家庭将来可能会造成社会问题。例如：孩子会觉得孤单，有时会被家长宠坏（be spoiled）。

　　比较两种不同的观点，我们能看出独生子女家庭有更多的优点。它对个人和国家都有好处。

　　「范文」

　　The One-Child Family

　　In China， most people have begun to think that a family with only one child is better than the one with many children . Family planning tends to control population growth. Besides， parents have much more time to look after their child. So there are more and more one-child families.

　　But some people say that the one-child family may result in some social problems in the future. For instance， the child will feel lonely and sometimes be spoiled by their parents.

　　Compared with the different view， we can see that the one-child family has more advantages. It benefits people as well as our country as a whole.

　　「评语」

　　本文紧扣内容要点，结构清晰，语句通顺，承接转换比较自然。用词规范，短语的灵活运用更为文章增色不少。不足之处是句式单调，缺少变化，行文也不够简洁，但总体上还是达到了题目的要求。