范文:The Rush to Cities

「要求」

　　要求：随着经济的发展，中国的城市化速度越来越快，大量人口拥入城市，在促进城市发展的同时，也带来不少问题，请你对此谈一下看法。

　　「范文」

　　The Rush to Cities

　　With the development of economy ， more and more people rush to cities. Some people rush to cities in order to look for jobs and earn more money while others want to learn new knowledge and improve the quality of their personal life.

　　Opportunities for bright young people are greater in the cities.

　　But there exist some problems. For example， owing to the increasing population， the housing and traffic problem are becoming more and more serious. And the rush of the country people to cities also leads to the rise in crimes.

　　To solve these problems， the government should take effective measures to control the population and make them live orderly. Also some opportunities should be created for the country people to receive education and improve their quality of life.

　　「评语」

　　本文成功之处在于，行文恰当，合理地运用了一些成语、习惯用语和固定搭配等表达方式，使文意的表达准确有力，形象生动。