范文:The Value of Time

「要求」

　　题目：时间是无价之宝，浪费时间就是浪费生命。请以“The Value of Time”为题，写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。每段的中心句已经给出。

　　Time is even more precious than money.

　　We should make full use of time.

　　There are a lot of people who waste their time.

　　We should get into the good habit of saving time.

　　「范文」

　　The Value of Time

　　A proverb says：“Time is money”。 But in my opinion， time is even more precious than money. When money is spent， we can earn it back. However， when time is gone， it will never return. This is the reason why we must save time.

　　It goes without saying that the time at our disposal is unusually limited. Hence， even an hour is extremely precious. We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As students we must not relax our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve society and our nation in the future.

　　It is a pity that there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their precious time smoking， drinking and gambling. They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.

　　In a word， we should get into the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness will not only bring us failure but also lead us to the road of poverty.

　　「评语」

　　该文分为四段，结构清晰，每段有每段的重点和内容。每一段，开门见山地谈到为什么我们要珍惜时间，因为它比金钱还宝贵；第二段里说，作为一名学生，更应该如此，“hence…”作为一种总结；第三段，对于一些不学无术的同学表示遗憾和惋惜。最后，用“in a word”来说明我们应该培养高效率地利用时间的好习惯。