范文:Is a TV Lounge Necessary to Students?

「要求」

　　学校中寄宿班的同学最近提议开设一个电视室，让大家在课余时间有机会看一看电视。为此，校领导们进行了认真的讨论，有的认为，为学生们配备电视只会分散大家精力，影响学习；而有的则认为，学生们可以通过电视加强与外部世界的联系，丰富知识，同时也在紧张的学习之余获得一定的放松。请你写一篇短文，谈一谈你认为开设一个电视室是否有必要，为什么？

　　「范文」

　　Is a TV Lounge Necessary to Students？

　　As a student， I completely agree with the proposition that students should have a television lounge. A television lounge not only is necessary to those who don't know how to spend their spare time after class， but also can help solve the problem of the noise in study halls caused by the students who have no homework. Indeed， many of the students want to have a place to relax after a day of hard work. Watching TV is a good way to relax. Students can share entertainment and havesome fun while watching interesting programs. In this way the TV lounge can help keep students out of trouble during part of their free time. A TV lounge would definitely be an attractive place for students. There can be no doubt that opening a television lounge would be beneficial to both those who want to have a quiet place to study and those who want to relax after a day of hard work.

　　「评语」

　　该文开门见山，先表明了作者对上述建议持肯定意见，随后作者阐述了支持的原因。虽然原因分析得有些简单，但全文叙述连贯，表达清楚，合乎逻辑，能够自圆其说，很好地支持了作者的观点。

　　Leave your classroom sometimes. It will clear your head.