范文:Finding your Talent

「要求」

　　校刊决定举办一次关于“学习与课外活动”的征文，要求如下：

　　有人认为在大学里应该多参加一些社团活动，这比功课重要。

　　有人认为在学校里主要的任务是学习，不愿参加课外活动。

　　以上2种看法你赞成哪一种，说明你的原因。

　　「范文」

　　Finding your Talent

　　I prefer the type of student who spends more time on his studies because I recognize that a person cannot be good at everything and that he must specialize.

　　An old English saying——Jack of all trades but master of none. I now realize that I was not an unfortunate child in preferring reading to football. I should， in fact， have been given more time in the library.

　　I have no sense when I take part in the activities such as clubs and sports. I find my favorite in studying. So I am willing to stay in library.

　　I think everyone has his own talent in certain things. So I also support the students who like to play football of other things more than study. Talent is a sense “God　 given”，I think everyone should find it and follow it.

　　「评语」

　　角度新颖。从“每个人都有自己的天分”入手，既表明了自己的立场，又论及了其它。论证合理明析，用词准确，句式完整。