范文:Studying Abroad 2

「要求」

　　Studying Abroad. 现在越来越多人想出国留学，一些人是想出国深造为将来祖国的建设添砖加瓦，也有的人只想出国，享受一种舒适的生活，你对此怎样看待。写一短文就以上提示谈谈你的看法。

　　「范文」

　　Studying Abroad

　　In recent years， more and more people want to study abroad. In foreign countries， there is a lot of advanced knowledge， which is of great use to our country. Some people want to learn abroad in order to benefit our country.

　　However， there are also some people who go abroad for some other purposes. They simply want to find a job there and enjoy a comfortable life. They forget that their motherland needs them.

　　So we should not say studying abroad is a good thing or bad thing. I hope those who study abroad will come back. We will work together to make a better life for ourselves.

　　「评语」

　　高考作文一般不会要求十分详尽的论述，而着重考察考生表词达意的完整和准确。因此，本文需要考生从提示入手，就两方面阐述看法，而不需要论证。范文显得条理清楚，结构严谨，词意中肯，值得借鉴。

　　“祖国母亲”一词英语也常表达为“Father land”