范文:I Am a Cat

「要求」

　　以“I Am a……”为题，描写一种动物，写出其基本习性、特点。（100字左右）

　　「范文」

　　I Am a Cat

　　I am a cat. I am pretty and always wear a soft fur coat. I also wear soft shoes and can walk noiselessly.

　　I dislike mice. They are a great nuisance to people. Whenever and wherever there are mice， I will catch them and kill them.

　　I like to stay at home and play with a ball of string. I always sleep in the day time and get up at night. I can see clearly in the dark.

　　I'm lazy and greedy sometimes. I steal fish and catch birds to eat. But people still like me.

　　「评语」

　　写这类文章要发挥一定的想象力。本文用拟人、比喻等手法，生动活泼，如“fur coat”、“soft shoes”等十分有趣。文字通顺，没有什么毛病，但可能太简单了些，句式上应该有所变化。