The Basketball Game

要求」

　　描写一场比赛，要求特点突出。字数100—150.

　　「范文」

　　The Basketball Game

　　The game was scheduled to start at eight o'clock on Friday night. Long before that， people began to arrive at the gymnasium. By seven thirty the seats were almost all taken up. The school band was there； the wore yellow and black uniforms. They started to play the national anthem at about a quarter to eight. Everybody stood up and began to sing. After that， two teams ran out onto the floor. The referee blew his whistle， and the game started. A basketball game is divide into two halves， with a rest period between the halves. During the first minute of the second half， the score was tied. From then on， the game was very exciting. First one team made a basket， then the other. The audience cheered and everybody was wondering which team was going to win. The ball hit the rim of the basket and seemed to hang there for a moment， and then it fell through the hoop. The whistle blew， and the game was over. The home team won， 70 to 68.

　　I love this game！

　　「评语」

　　文章很好地表现了比赛的激烈、精彩。开头部分，时间未到，座位已满。暗示着比赛的精彩程度。尤值得一提的是对最后一球的描写：紧张、刺激，扣人心弦。