My Most Unforgettable Experience
「要求」
以“我最难忘的经历”为题,写一篇100字左右的短文。
「范文」
My Most Unforgettable Experience
One day on my way to school, I ran across a traffic accident, in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle. I rushed to his rescue instinctively. I lifted him in my arms and hailed a taxi, which took us quickly to nearby hospital. After emergency treatment, the boy came to. I felt at ease when I knew that he had only suffered from minor bone fractures and would rceover in a couple of weeks. I left the hospital without giving my name, but my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand the meaning of the proverb:“Helping others is the source of happiness.”This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
「评语」
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