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「要求」
假设你是一位外国游客。一天你在北京的一家礼品商店里购物。你在观赏精美的手工艺品(handcrafts)时,觉得样样有趣,看得入了迷。结果买好一套纯玳瑁壳(tortoiseshell)制的书画(calligraphy)和梳子以后,你把手提包忘在了柜台上,里面约有2000美元。当你走出店时,一位年轻的营业员送来了你的包。包里什么也没少。你酬谢他200美元,但他分文不要,他的无私精神深深感动了你。
「范文」
One day I was shopping at a gift shop in Beijing. I was greatly interested and lost myself enjoying the beautiful handicrafts. After I paid for a set of calligraphy, I left my handbag on the counter. There were about two thousand dollars in it.
I had already walked out of the shop when a young shop assistant came up with my hand bag. He had insisted on my checking it, and so I opened it and found nothing lost. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 dollars, but he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless spirit.
「评语」
本文句型结构整齐、紧凑,句子生动。对事件记叙有主有次,突出了售货员的无私奉献精神。
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