A Diary(3)

「要求」

　　根据以下提示写篇日记，字数：100—160.

　　7月23日，晴。

　　放学回家路上，我见一位老大爷背着沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，样子十分焦急。我走上去问是怎么回事，原来老大爷刚从乡下来，进城看在工厂工作的儿子。由于是初次来，不认识去工厂的路。于是，我就帮他背袋，带他去工厂找儿子。好不容易才找到他儿子的家，老大爷和儿子十分感激。我回家时天已很晚，又累又饿，但心里却甜滋滋的。因为我又为别人做了一件好事。

　　「范文」

　　July 23th， Sunny

　　After school， on my way home I caught sight of an old grandpa standing by the roadside with a heavy bag on his back. He looked rather anxious. I went up to find out what the matter was. He told me that he had just come from the countryside to see his son who worked in a factory. He had never been here before， and didn't know the way to the factory. So I took over his bag and took him to the factory. We had some difficulty in finding his son's apartment. Both the grandpa and his son were very thankful.

　　It was very late when I got home. I was very tired and hungry. But I was very happy that I had done a good deed for others.

　　「评语」

　　日记记叙了一件自己助人为乐的好事。首先交待的时间、地点、人物、事件经过，记叙完整，使人觉得真实可信。本文连词运用十分到位，值得借鉴。