范文:Decision

「要求」

　　有人认为“就算作出了错误的决定，也比遇事没有主意好得多！”你同意吗？请写出充足的理由表明你的观点。

　　论据充分。论证要可信。分析清楚，语言明白流畅。

　　「范文」

　　Decision

　　A person's journey through life might be seen as a series of decisions for the better and for the worse. So making a decision is a most important thing in a person's life. I follow the reasoning that when a person is in dilemma， it's usually best to do something. Moreover， when a person genuinely tries to change his circumstances， a bad decision can turn out for the better.

　　Scientists are often aware of the problems of decision making. Einstein was deeply concerned about the destructive effects of the “miracle ”of nuclear power. Yet the scientists of his generation also saw the potential benefits of nuclear energy. Like many scientists， he believed that the decision to create——to strive for progress——is the purpose of learning. Theories of scientific progress rest on the assumption that an invention or discovery will produce more good than evil.

　　So I support the statement that it is better to make a wrong decision than to make none at all.

　　「评语」

　　文章开篇点题，阐明了“作出决定”在一生中的重要性，接下来又从科学的角度，点明“作出决定”在科学研究中的作用，从而支持了文章的论点：“就算作出了错误的决定，也比遇事没有主意好得多！”结尾再一次点题，以总结全文，呼应开篇。