A Walk in The Early Morning
「要求」
请你根据下面提供的情景,充分发挥你的想像力,写一篇短文,结构要求完整:
Time: yesterday morning.
Place: at a park.
Persons: people of different ages and professions.
一日之计在于晨。
「范文」
A Walk in The Early Morning
Yesterday morning I got up very early. And everything around was very quiet. The sky was blue and clear, the river calm and peaceful. So I decided to go to the park to have a walk.
When I arrived at the park, I was surprised to find that there were so many people of different ages and professions. Old workers were doing morning exercises. Young men and young women were having a stroll down the path. Students were reading aloud in English or Chinese.
When I realized that I was not the first one to come to the park, I made up my mind to get up earlier the next morning and try to be the first one there.
「评语」
本文根据要求所提供的场景,充分发挥了自己的想像力和创造力。所述所写场情场景,恰如其分,相当生动。语句通俗流畅,使人读来仿佛身临其境。
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