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「要求」

  如果你走进洗澡间,发现水龙头没关,洗澡间已漫水成灾。这时,你该怎么办?请以“Quick! What shall I do?”为题,用第一人称写一篇文章,描述“灾情”,并说明你“救灾”的过程。“救灾”过程如下。

  拧上水龙头。

  用水桶舀水。

  用拖把擦干。

  收拾完毕,引出教训。100字左右。

  「范文」

  Quick! What shall I do ?

  I get to the bathroom. It is flooding. Someone has forgotten to turn off the tap. The wash basin is full of water and the water is soon covering the floor and running into the next room. What shall I do? I rush to the floor and turn off the tap as quickly as possible. Then I use a pail to carry the water. One pail after another I pour the water into the bath-tub until no water can be held by the pail. Then I use the mop to dry up the floor.

  After an hour's hard work the bathroom is OK again. I think everyone should remember to turn off the tap next time.

  「评语」

  文章写得生动活泼,富有生活情趣。没有用太难的词汇,却显得叙事清晰流畅,风格明快自然,表现出较好的语言功底和文字表达能力。由于题中的内容比较简略,需要个人适度发挥,因此“One pail after another……”这样的句子就显得很可贵。全篇文章结构完整、有条理;句式富于变化,充分表达了题目的要求。

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