The Best Picture in My Eyes

In my room， there is a picture entitled“Feeding the birds”on the wall. Though its painter is unknown to us， in my view， I think [in my view] （1） it's the best picture I've ever seen.

　　Though the picture is named“Feeding the birds”，there is no a bird [not any bird] （2） in it. We only see a woman sitting on a chair with three little girls seated opposite her. The girl in the middle is opening her mouth to a spoon of food the lady is giving. The other two girls are looking at the spoon. In the picture there is also a hen with some chicks walking around them. The whole picture makes people feel peaceful and tend to imagine.

　　I suppose the painter's purpose is to remind us something [of something] （3） that is worth remembering. Just like feeding birds， our parents give us not only food to eat， clothes to wear， but endless love as well. Bathed in their love， we grow up little by little. When we are in trouble， they always help us as much as possible though our willful temperament （固执的脾性） often hurts them. When we make progress in our studies， they always congratulate us happily as if they themselves succeeded. Parents' love can't be expressed by words. We should do our best to repay it.

　　济南外国语学校 石菲菲

　　评 语

　　从一幅画联想到父母亲的爱，行文较为自然流畅，对图片的描写按位置顺序进行，突出重点，有条不紊。文章中某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：

　　（1）in my view和I think意义相同，只需一个就行了。

　　（2）no a是错误的，要么no bird（s），要么not any bird（s）。

　　（3）remind sb. of sth. 是固定搭配。注意of的使用。