A Diary(2)

「要求」

　　写一篇日记，记叙下午在回家的路上，见到一个迷路的男孩，他正站在一车站前哭泣。你上前安慰他，弄清他的住址后送他回了家。他父母都很感动。尽管到家很晚，你仍然感到高兴，因为你做了你该做的事。

　　「范文」

　　September 20th， Friday Sunny.

　　This afternoon， on my way home from school， I saw a boy standing in front of a bus station， crying sorrowfully. It was obvious that he had lost his way. His families must be worrying about him， I thought. I went over to comfort him till he stopped weeping. After finding out his address， I sent him home. His parents were deeply moved when they saw us enter their house. They thanked me over and over again. Though I got home very late， I felt very happy because I had done what I should do.

　　「评语」

　　本文记叙要素完整，心理活动描写也得体恰当。没有将汉字提示机械地译成英文，而是写得语句连贯，表意深刻。