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  一天,你上学晚了,紧登着自行车赶路。到了一个十字路口,见没有警察,你看见是红灯亮着也没有停车。不料,警察过来了,把你挡住。但是,等你向他讲明情况后,他只是批评了你几句就放你走了。你觉得这是一位和蔼可亲、通情达理的警察。但是你也认识到无论在什么时候,都要严格遵守交通规则。

  「作文示范」

  A Kind Policeman

  郭志勇

  It was already 2:50 when I got up this afternoon. Classes would begin in ten minutes, so I quickly ran out of my house and got on my bike.

  On my way to school, I rode very fast. Luckily, every time I got to a crossing, the traffic lights were green. I soon reached the last crossing. This time, the lights were red, but I didn't stop my bike. To my surprise, a policeman appeared and stopped me. “Why didn't you stop when the traffic lights were red?” he asked.

  “Classes will begin in no time,” I answered.

  Hearing this, he criticized me for not having obeyed the traffic rules. I drooped my head and said, “I'm sorry.” I was afraid that he wouldn't let me go. I was about to cry when he told me to obey the traffic rules next time and let me go. I thanked him and rode away.

  Though I was late for school this afternoon, I had learned something: one must obey the rules at any time.

  (选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第7期)

  「写法指要」

  本文写得恳切、真实,作者毫不掩饰自己的过错。第一段讲上课时间快到了;第二段写闯红灯;第三段是作者回答警察的一句话;第四段写警察的行为,放行的事;第五段写接受的教训。

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