A Fellow Student
「要求」
描写一位你身边熟悉的人,注意要抓住人物特点,突出人物性格。字数100─150.
「范文」
It was my first day at school. I walked into the building where I was going to live ,and looked at door after door for my name. At last I found it. In the room there was already a student making his bed.
After we said“Hello”to each other, he continued his work, paying no attention to me.“what a stuck-up fellow,”I thought. I examined the room. It was not different in the fittings and furnishings from any other room I had seen. but it had been thoroughly cleaned by my new roommate, no doubt.
I looked at him. He was thin, short, and dark. His hair was like a bundle of straw. His dirty clothes and tired look were clearly signs of a long journey . His clothes were made of cheap cloth. The coat was too short and the trousers were too loose. And he wore a pair of rubber shoes , which were very unfashionable. He did not look like a smart senior student at all . “A yokel ,”I concluded.
The second time he spoke ,his accent told me that he was from the south“Shall I help you to get your luggage from the office?”he asked.
I did not refuse since I really needed help. He was quick in movement.“A good guy ,”I said to myself,“I will make friends with him.”I hurried and caught up with him.
「评语」
观察细致入微,刻画逼真传神,一个不善言辞、朴素善良的农家少年跃然纸上。作者驾驭文字的技巧,娴熟老道。本文很值得一读。
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