A Friend To Remember

「要求」

　　你应邀参加“英语园地”的征文活动，写一篇以“A Friend to Rememker”为题的英语小短文。要求如下：

　　简要地介绍你的一位朋友。

　　写清你快他/她的原因。

　　语言流畅，用词准确。

　　朋友有如美酒，沥久弥醇。

　　「范文」

　　A Friend To Remember

　　One of my best friends is my middle school history teacher. To me， he is not only a beloved teacher but also an intimate friend. Though I last met him years ago， I have not forgotten his amazing qualities.

　　I was impressed most deeply by his devotion to teaching. He was not after money nor power. Instead， he spent all his energy on teaching. Well-prepared and clearly delivered， his lectures always drew our attention to different historical events both in China and in the world. Furthermore， he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way. He made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.

　　「评语」

　　这篇小短文情真意切，作者用词很贴切到位，很好地表达了作者的怀念之情。语言通俗晓畅，可见作者对英语掌握得很好。