My Friend 2

「要求」

　　以“My Friend”为题，描写你的一个朋友，要求包括以下内容（100字左右）：

　　Who is your friend？（name， age）。

　　What does he/she look like？（appearance， height， face）？

　　What kind of person is he/she？

　　Does he/she have any hobby or habit？

　　Do you often do things together？

　　「范文」

　　My Friend

　　Tom is my best friend. He is eighteen years old. He is tall， thin and has a funny face. Our teacher always says that he is a naughty boy because he speaks and plays too much in class. But in fact， he is very clever and does his homework very well. He is glad to help others but he is not polite enough. Playing football is the thing he likes to do best， and he is the captain of our class team. We have been good friends ever since we were 5.We do everything together as much as possible. I like Tom very much.

　　All that glitters is not gold， but gold will glitter finally.

　　「评语」

　　本文结构紧凑，条理分明，很好地把握了题中的要点，人物形象生动鲜明。语句通顺但不够流畅；句式长短交错而富于变化。