A Good Friend of Mine

「要求」

　　题目：A Good Friend of Mine内容要点：

　　你朋友的姓名、年龄、身材、衣着；学习、工作情况。

　　品质：待人谦虚、乐于助人。

　　业余爱好：喜欢音乐、爱好体育。

　　我从朋友那里学到了很多东西。（字数80—120）

　　朋友一生一起走……

　　「范文」

　　My Friend

　　Linling is my good friend. We have been classmates for three years. He's 17 now. Though he is not tall， he looks healthy and active. He is always plainly dressed.

　　He is a music lover and likes sports very much. He studies hard and does well in every subject. However， He is modest and always ready to help others. I used to be poor in English. He helps me with my English patiently. With his help， I've made much progress and caught up with others.

　　I've learned a lot from him. He sets me a good example.

　　「评语」

　　本文将一个人各个互不相关的方面组织成有血有肉、层次分明，有主有次的整体，使朋友的形象跃然纸上。本文句式简单，没有任意发挥，文章主题明确。