My Mother

「要求」以“My Mother”为题，写一篇100字左右的文章，突出人物两到三个方面的特点，不需要具体事例，注重真实性。

　　「范文」

　　My Mother

　　My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She always smiles at everybody. She takes good care of father and me and gives us every comfort. She loves us and we love her too.

　　My mother is also very thrifty and industrious. She saves every penny she can and keeps everything in order. She gets up early and goes to sleep late every day. She works hard without complaining. As she has been constantly busy she looks older than she really is. But I still think she is beautiful.

　　This is my mother and I hope she'll always be happy and healthy.

　　「评语」

　　本文结构完整，叙述清晰、有条理，表达了作者对母亲深深的赞美与感激，很有真情实感。句式比较单一，但语言规范平易，用词分寸把握得当，较好地满足了题目中的要求。