My Friend

「要求」

　　介绍你的好友巫敏。他17岁，是个高材生。他学习一向刻苦，几乎门门功课都是优秀，在计算机学科方面尤其出众，曾经在全市计算机程序编制大赛中获奖。他不仅学业成功，而且还积极参加社会活动。巫敏为人诚实负责，容易相处。 他乐于助人，老师和同学都喜欢他。你为有像巫敏这样的好朋友而感自豪。

　　「范文」

　　My Friend

　　Wu Min is a close friend of mine. He is 17 years old. He has always been working hard at his studies. As a top student， he is excellent in almost all the subjects， especially in computer science. He once won a prize in a city-wide programming competition. Not only is he successful in his studies but also he takes an active part in social activities. He is honest， responsible and easy to get along with.

　　He is always ready to help others and is very popular with both his classmates and teachers.I am proud of having such a good friend as WuMin.

　　A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　「评语」

　　本文介绍了巫敏的主要特点——优秀，从几个方面进行说明。不同方面的过渡显得自然。语言简炼但富有表现力，表现了其多方面的性格。