范文:The First Snow

「要求」

　　请以“The first…”为题，描写一场景，可以是自然景观，也可是其它的某些经历。要求描写具体生动，抓住事物特点，字数：100左右。

　　「范文」

　　The First Snow

　　The first snow came. How beautiful it was， falling so silently all day long， all night long， on the mountains， on the meadows， on the roofs！ All white covered the river， which marked its course by a winding black line across the leaden sky revealed more fully the wonderful beauty and intricacy of their branches. What silence， too， came with the snow， and what seclusion！ Every sound was muffled. Every noise changed to something soft.

　　「评语」

　　本文通过写第一场雪时的景象，抒发了对大自然的爱恋。这一主题贯穿文章始终，形象优美逼真，读来使人如身临其境，若闻其声，具有很强的感染力。