范文:Smoking

「要求」

　　要求：现在，社会上吸烟者的数量十分庞大，其中也不乏青少年。请你谈谈对这种现象的看法，提示要点：

　　吸烟者的心态。

　　吸烟的危害。

　　应采取哪些措施禁止吸烟。

　　字数为80左右

　　「范文」

　　Smoking

　　Smoking is very popular among people in China. Some of the smokers believe that smoking can ease their nerves. But they never think of the effect it might have on other people's health. Government authorities should launch an early campaign to educate people on the danger of smoking. Information of the negative effects of particularly the young， could learn of the danger of the habit.

　　「评语」

　　审题准确是本文的一个突出特点。作者既把论述的重点放在了3个提示要点之上，又没忘题目中涉及到的对青少年的影响。本文详略得当，值得大家学习借鉴。

　　戒烟嘛，很容易，我已经戒过两千多次了──马克吐温