范文:Happiness

「要求」

　　人人都渴望幸福，但对幸福的理解却不尽相同：有人追逐金钱，有人看重名誉，有人渴望友情，有人视爱情为人生的崇高追求。你呢？写下你对幸福的看法。

　　字数：100左右。

　　「范文」

　　Happiness

　　Happiness means different things to different people. For example some people believe that if they have a lot of money or many material things， they will be happy. They believe that if they are wealthy， they will be able to do everything they want， and so they will be happy. On the other hand， some people believe that money is not the only source of happiness. These people value their intelligence， or their health， or their religion； these things make them happy， For me， happiness is closely tied to my family. I am happy if my father and my mother live in harmony. When all the members of my family share the good time and the bad， I am happy. Although the definition of happiness depends on the individual， my “wealth” of happiness is my family.

　　Remember this， —— that very little is needed to make a happy life.

　　「评语」

　　作者首先列出不同人对幸福的不同理解，然后引出作者本人对幸福的观点—“closely tied to my family”尤其“I'm happy if my father and mother live in harmony”读来令人感动。全篇行文流畅，结构严谨，首尾呼应。