范文:Love

「要求」

　　题目：爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情，请以“love”为题，写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。

　　Love plays an important part in this world today.

　　The love between you and your parents is a specials love.

　　There are other kinds of love.

　　「范文」

　　Love

　　Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society， relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for， and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.

　　The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love， as any other sincere love， must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children's lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.

　　There are other kinds of love. Love between friends， partners， human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives， even though we may not have the chance to think about it， it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.

　　「评语」

　　该文逻辑清晰，词语简练，先从“爱”的普遍意义谈起，说到“爱”的含义，“爱”对我们的重要。在第二段里又重点地谈了谈父母和孩子之间的“爱”，然后结尾处点到了其他种类的“爱”。有序有节，完整精干。

　　并不是好文章必须追求艰涩的词语，平易的语言只要运用得当，也会有极好的效果。