范文:Ambition

「要求」

　　ambition的意思是我们的生活目标，是对成功、权力、财富等等的强烈渴望。ambition并不意味着要成为的，它是一种激励我们向前的目标，使我们不因失败而失去希望。每个人都有自己的ambition，但不是每个人都能实现自己的渴望。结合以上内容，以“Ambition”为题写一篇议论文。

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　　「范文」

　　Ambition

　　Our ambition means the goal we have in our life. It is a strong desire for success， power， riches， and so on. To have ambition doesn't necessarily mean one wants to be number one. This is not the real sense of the word. True ambition is the goal that encourages us to look forward and not to lose hope because of failure. Ambition differs from person to person and everyone has his or her own ambition. Yet not every-one of us can succeed in what we desire to do.

　　Live all you can. It's a mistake not to. The right time is any time， that one is still so lucky as to live.

　　「评语」

　　本文充分表达了题目的要求，思路清晰，结构完整，内容简明扼要。语句活泼流利，用词直接精当，避免了华丽浮夸的词藻或含义模糊的语句。紧扣题意，中心明确，是一篇成功的议论文。结尾处引用格言更显出深厚的语言功底，为全文增色不少。