范文:Is Failure a Bad Thing 1

「要求」

　　每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。

　　失败是生活中的常事。

　　人们对失败的态度各不相同。

　　就我而言，我认为失败…

　　「范文」

　　Is Failure a Bad Thing

　　Failure is quite a common thing in our life. As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them， but in many cases， it is not so easy， or even impossible. Then how should we face failure？

　　Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure， some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just don't fear failure. They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result， not only can failure stop them， but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday.

　　As for me， I don't think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only enrich my experience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind， I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end.

　　「评语」

　　本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进行铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接紧密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。