范文:The Automobile

「要求」

　　汽车自发明以来，已成为人们生活中不可缺少的一部分。请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇关于汽车的文章。

　　The automobile is constantly improved.

　　The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency.

　　On the other hand， the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of driving regulations.

　　「范文」

　　The Automobile

　　The automobile is constantly improved. Man has given his talents to full play in designing and perfecting all kinds of automobiles. Old-fashioned types are replaced by new ones， which are faster， more energy-saving. more enduring and more comfortable. The engine， the wheels， the body， the tires and the inner furnishing have all undergone much improvement.

　　The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency. When a hospital receives an urgent call， its ambulance dashes to the sick or the wounded person. It carries him to the hospital before it is too late to save his life. Being informed of a crime， the police drive to the spot to subdue the criminal. When a building is on fire， the fire engine runs at a high speed to put out the fire.

　　Life doesn't give itself to one who tires to keep all its advantage at once.

　　On the other hand， the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of traffic regulations . It is not a rare happening that two cars collide on the motor way and the drivers get killed. It is often reported that a truck overrides a child or throws down a bicyclist. The most dreadful is the accident that a bus falls down a steep hill with all passengers falling victims to the tragedy.

　　「评语」

　　本文根据所给的主题句展开段落。第一段写汽车在许多方面都得到了改进。第二段举例陈述了汽车在紧急时刻的作用。第三段举例说明了由于违章驾驶汽车所造成的危害。全篇文理通顺，论据充足，语言明白易懂。