范文:The Danger of Fake Commodities

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　　要求：目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣产品（fake commodities），请用100字左右论述为什么会有这种现象，并举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。

　　「范文」

　　The Danger of Fake Commodities

　　Today， fake commodities are quite common. In order to get high profits， some factories and companies produce fake commodities. Another cause of this phenomenon is that laws are not strict enough. Fake Commodities can bring about great loss to both state and private property. A case in point is that if a consumer buys some fake medicine， he will inevitably suffer much pain. The fake medicine may even cost him his life. So every one of us has the duty to fight against fake commodities for our society and for ourselves.

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