A Football match

「要求」

　　假设五月一日，你在市体育馆（the city stadium）观看了一场足球比赛。请你写一短文，利用你平日最喜欢的球赛，记叙比赛经过。

　　「范文」

　　A Football match

　　In the morning of May 1st， a football match took place between Shen Hua Team and Guo An Team in the city stadium. When I got there the stand was already packed with spectators.

　　The match was exciting. A home player got hold of the ball and kicked it miles over the bar. Towards the end of the match， a forward got a chance to give the ball a hard kick and it skidded straight into the back of net over the goalkeeper.

　　The crowd went wild， laughing， jumping and shouting loudly.

　　When I was on my way home， my heart was still full of excitement.

　　「评语」

　　本文要求写一记叙文，所以作者首先交待了时、地、人物（参赛队员）后，选取了两个主要场景表明了球赛的激烈和观众的激动面貌。比赛情况采用的细节描写很生动。文末点题使文章结构更显完整。