A Spring Outing

「要求」

　　相信你肯定有过和同学一同春游的经历。现在就请你写一篇短文记述你经历的一次有趣的春游。

　　「范文」

　　A Spring Outing

　　Every year， with the coming of spring， the weather will get warmer. And we usually have a spring outing at this time of the year.

　　Because of the warm and pleasant days， many people would like to go for an outing. I still remember one of my spring outings， for it was a very interesting experience. It was a bright and cheerful morning. I made a decision to visit a famous mountain near our campus. I went along with some of my schoolmates. We were singing and laughing all the way. There was a large piece of green grass land at the mountain foot. When we were climbing， we could see many beautiful flowers on the mountainside. The mountain was very high ，but we reached its top at last. There， we visited a temple and had a talk with a monk. He told us something about the history of the temple and we got to know about Sakyamuni， the founder of Buddhism. From the mountain top， we could get a birds'-eye view of our campus. It seemed very small.

　　When it was getting dark we returned. Although we were very tired at night， we were too excited to go to sleep.

　　Comes spring！ Let's have an outing！

　　「评语」

　　在本文中，作者回忆了与同学们共同经历的一次愉快的春游。内容虽然比较简单，但结构清晰完整，语言流畅，表达生动，并没有给人以写流水帐之感。