My Profession

「要求」

　　每个人都有自己的理想，将来在社会上你想从事什么职业呢？请以“My Profession”为题，谈谈自己想从事的职业，你选择这个职业的原因，你将为实现这个理想做哪些准备。

　　「范文」

　　My Profession

　　If I may choose my own profession， I would like to be a doctor. It is said that doctors make a lot of money， but this is not what I am after.

　　Illness and disease always bring pain and suffering to mankind. Only doctors who are trained to know the causes of different kinds of illness and the best ways to cure them can help prevent them. What's more， a doctor is a useful person and respected by people.

　　I'll work hard to learn as much as possible. In particular， I should do well in physics， chemistry and mathematics. I hope to enter a medical school after I graduate from high school.

　　「评语」

　　文章紧扣题意，开头说明了他的职业追求，接着叙述了选择这一职业的原因及自己所作的准备，表达了作者为人类解除痛苦战胜疾病的良好愿望。语言流畅，内容充实，是一篇优秀的文章。