范文:Is Failure a Bad Thing 2

「要求」

　　失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。

　　字数150—200字，题目自拟。

　　「范文」

　　Is Failure a Bad Thing？

　　Failure is a common thing in our daily lives. As students， We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. When we play game， we sometimes can't avoid losing to others. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences.

　　However， there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure， they think the world has come to an end. Some people don't take failure seriously and just ignore it， while some others learn much from it.

　　In my opinion， what really counts is not failure itself， but what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up， and in the mean time learn something from our failure， We'll certainly be successful in the end. So I'm never afraid of failure， for I believe that failure is not a bad thing， but the mother of success.

　　看问题一定要看到正反两面，体现在文中，就往往是鲜明的对比。

　　「评语」

　　表达思想清楚，内容比较充实，文字流畅，句子结构多样。第一段、第二段主题句简练而贴切，句间衔接比较自然，用词造句有不少闪光点，如：the world has come to an end 等。