范文:Losing Weight

「要求」

　　题目：减肥。请根据以下要点写一短文，谈谈你对减肥的看法。

　　节食（diet. n.）与慢跑（jogging）是两种效果不同的减肥方法。

　　慢跑经济而有效；节食效果不佳。

　　减肥如走极端则很危险。

　　「范文」

　　Losing Weight

　　Many fat people want to lose weight and to be younger and slimmer. They often choose two ways——diet and jogging. Their effects are different.

　　Jogging is the easiest and cheapest way of shaping the body. For the price of a good pair of running shoes， anyone can join the race anywhere.

　　Dieting， too， has become a common way. People eat very little everyday， and the food they eat cannot supply as much nutrition as the body needs.

　　Both jogging and dieting， carried to extremes， can be harmful. Above all， common sense should be the keystone for any dieting and exercise scheme.

　　It is true that the principal part of beauty lies in decent motion.

　　「评语」

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