范文:Bicycles

「要求」

　　自行车在中国恐怕是人们日常生活中最常用的交通工具之一。请你根据下面的提纲以“Bicycles”为题写一篇短文。

　　中国“自行车王国”之称。

　　自行车是一种必不可少的交通工具。

　　自行车给城市带来的问题。

　　「范文」

　　Bicycles

　　Bicycles have become part of our lives. In our country almost everybody has at least one bicycle. That's why we are called “the Kingdom of Bicycles”。

　　It is necessary for us to own a bicycle. We go to school and go to work by bicycle. Wherever we go ， the most common means of transportation is the bicycle. Furthermore， riding bicycles is good to our health. When riding a bicycle， we need to coordinate the movement of our arms， legs as well as our mind just like doing exercises. Even though we have higher living standards and more cars ， we still regard bicycles as our life necessity. We can't imagine what our life would be without bicycles.

　　However， bicycles also bring problems to our life. Some people don't abide by regulations when riding bicycles and some don't take others' safety into consideration while riding too fast. During rush hours， thousands of bicycles appear on the narrow streets. Traffic jam caused by bicycles is nothing new. Therefore， we have a long way to go to solve the problem.

　　「评语」

　　该文内容切题，结构清楚。用词准确，句子与句子之间衔接恰当，富有逻辑性。