范文:A Comparison Between Two Kinds of Clothes

「要求」

　　夏天到了，有的同学换上了尼龙面料（nylon）的夏装，而有的同学则穿起了丝和棉等天然面料制成的衣服。英语老师在课堂上让大家围绕这两类面料的利弊进行讨论，然后写一篇短文对二者进行比较，指明你喜欢哪一种，并说出你的理由。

　　「范文」

　　A Comparison Between Two Kinds of Clothes

　　Clothes made of nylon have big advantages over those made of natural materials such as cotton and silk. First of all， they are more durable. That is to say， they don't wear out so quickly. Second， they are easier to wash and dry. So the wearer can spare time while washing and drying them. Besides these two advantages， clothes made of nylon are lighter， and they keep their shape longer.

　　In spite of this ，clothes made of nylon can not match those made of natural materials in several respects. They are not quite as beautiful as silk， and as cheap as cotton. They make the wearer feel hot and sticky， therefore less comfortable than clothes made of natural materials.

　　As each kind has its advantages， it is hard to say which I prefer. There are clothes made by mixing cotton or silk with nylon. They can make up the deficiencies of the former by acquiring the strong points of the latter. I prefer this kind of clothes.

　　「评语」

　　本文采用比较和对照的方式，说明了两类用不同材料制成的衣物的长处和短处。文章先谈了以尼龙制成的衣物的长处——耐穿，易洗，易干，轻便，不易变形等；接着又谈论了用棉和丝等天然材料制成的衣物的长处——美观，柔软，舒适等；最后写明了作者的选择及作出这种选择的原因。该文结构清晰，论据充分，观点明确。文章套路结构具有代表性，值得同学们学习。