Just for Some Stamps
「要求」
你有过等待的经历吗?如果虽然等了很久,最后还是没等到,那又会怎么样呢?写下你的感觉吧。不少于100字。
「范文」
I don't know how it is that whenever I go to a post office, I always find people have some long and complicated business to go. Only coming in to buy some stamps, I am obliged to wait patiently while some annoying people take ten minutes to complete a form that even a child can fill out in one minute. People in other queues move quickly forward to take their turn and are served by cheerful smiling clerks. Sometimes feeling that I cannot endure waiting in my motionless queue any longer, I decide to join another one. It may be longer, but at least it is moving. This turns out to be the worst thing I could have done.
Finally my turn comes. The clerk pushes forward a printed sign saying“CLOSED” and without a smile says briefly:“Sorry, going to lunch.”
I wait and wait, but…
「评语」
这是一段精彩的小幅描写,因为等待的焦急心理,及至于对别人的不满而咒骂,都很生动,尤其是残酷性的结尾更是出人意料。选材必须是自己熟悉的,这一点很重要。
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