Young People Should Pursue Long

Fame and recognition are so attractive that most of us are pursuing them desperately. We admire those who become famous at a young age and we hope the same thing will happen to us. However， an important fact has been neglected： Talent and good chance are the main factors for an early success. Most young people are not geniuses， so young people should be encouraged to pursue long term， realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.

　　Only in the process of pursuing long term， realistic goals can knowledge be accumulated. Some young people always complain， "I am not successful just because I don't have good chance." But a famous saying tells us； Chance only patronize people who have got preparation. Without accumulation of knowledge， how can one achieve his life goal or grasp the good chance？ Knowledge is power. Albert Einstein， such a genius，had returned to university to learn math related to physics for seven years before he wrote his theory.

　　And secondly， one can become mature and persistent in the process of pursuing long-term， realistic goals. The way of pursuing long term goals is a rough one. But only through many setbacks and failures， can one become tougher and more persistent so that he/she wouldn't get frustrated easily in later time or even get prepared to confront another setback. Such persistent spirit is vital in one's success. I remember a famous person once said， "One must endure great loneliness while pursuing his goal." People who experience this process tend to be more mature. They are likely to hold steering wheel of their life firmly because they are clearly aware of what they really want in life.

　　Furthermore， an early success may be dangerous. Young people with fame and recognition tend to get lost. As a famous saying goes， "you live with a fame and you will learn to limp."Fame is like a heavy burden pressed on your shoulder. Young people are often unable to release the burden correctly. Some of them release themselves in extreme ways such as taking drug or getting drunk. Hollywood movie star， July Barymoore， is one of them. She got famous at the age of eight， then she took drug and often got drunk and was sent to prison twice. "I felt I was in a black hole and I completely lost my direction at that time." She recalled.

　　Young people lack vital factors for success like knowledge and experience. Moreover， they are not mature enough to endure failures， setbacks and heavy burdens. They are not sober enough to resist the temptation when they got fame and recognition. In short， young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term，realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.

　　简 评

　　本文作者针对当今社会上许多年轻人急于求成，注重眼前利益的浮躁心态，发表了自己的看法：成功需要有长远目光和长期的奋斗。王佳伟同学对这一议题显然深思熟虑，下起笔来胸有成竹，一气呵成。文章分三个方面来论证：追求成功需要十年磨一剑的勇气，因为"机遇只垂青有准备的人"；需要成熟的心态和不屈的意志，因为道路艰险，"前进途中还须忍受孤寂"；而过于轻易的成功容易使人迷失方向，一朝成名的影星就是有力的证明。

　　结尾重申三方面理由，总结全文，结论清楚，有力，毫无重复累赘之感。纵观全文，结构完整，层次分明；论点鲜明，论据充足，时而旁征博引，中西谚语随手拈来；时而援引事实，名人的经历如现身说法。全文显示出作者较强的思辨能力，广博的知识面和娴熟的写作技巧。