My English Study Experience

English is my favorite subject and I once won a second prize in Sichuan English Reading Comprehension Competition for Middle School Students （四川省中学生英语阅读竞赛）。 Now I'm good at English and one of the best students at English in our senior grade one . [Now I think I can use English better and I am one of the students in the class who do best in English examinations. ] （1） How have I studied English？

　　First， I read a lot of English， beginning from junior time [the time when I was a junior middle school student ] （ 2 ） . I read many English stories and jokes. I didn't get bored because the stories and jokes were interesting. Thus I have got to be more and more interested in English and learned a lot of the language through reading widely.

　　Second， I have kept a diary in English. I just write down what I do， what I see and what I think of every day. I try my best to express myself in the most simple words. In this way Ihave improved my writing ability a lot. On the other hand， this diary writing has also helped me to form the habit to think in English.

　　The above are my two ways of English study. Would you please try them if you're interested？

　　四川省云阳中学高一（3）班 刘万云

　　评 语

　　文章用罗列法展开介绍了自己学习英语的体会，对同龄人有一定的启发。文章中某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：

　　（1）原文似乎有不够谦虚之嫌，改后较为客观。

　　（2）原文junior time （初中时候）表达不规范。故改之。其实原文还可简写成：I began to read a lot of English when I was a junior middle school student.